I was mad
Submitted by Dweller on Tue, 10/09/2007 - 5:58pmI was mad
I was mad
but a few hours ago,
Hysterical on the dingy bathroom tiles--
With their mold poking through cold squares
like clovers, 
I cried. Into a mountain of dirty laundry
My legs splayed like dead cattle,
for a few hours, I was mad.
:)
I think it is pretty even if you don't think it is very well written. :) I can relate very well. :)
Thank you very much. I'm
Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it. :) Thanks for your comment.
dweller.
if you think you're bad, you're probably above average!
By the way, are you at all familiar with Vogon Poetry? Look it up at Wikipedia, and enjoy! (heh heh)
(This is a good anecdote for those who think they're "terrible poets"; when you read Vogon stuff, you'll see that you ain't so bad as them!!)
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"As domains of experience become more alien to us, we need greater and greater openmindedness even to conceive of their existence."--R.D. Laing in _The Politics of Experience_
:) I'm familiar. Hehe,
:) I'm familiar. Hehe, thanks for your comment Chas !