The Albatross by Charles Baudelaire
Submitted by JuliaM9 on Tue, 12/30/2008 - 2:54amI do have a love-hate relationship with Romantic poets. Sometimes I want to shake them and say, "Stop it! Stop trying to make it seem so beautiful! Stop being so proud of yourselves and your own melancholy!" Maybe it's a gender thing-- male romantic poets seem to duke it out or out-macho each other by seeing who can be darker, more mysterious, madder. It is beautiful sometimes (it being bipolar disorder/mental illness), but romanticizing (pun intended) it that way is dangerous and somehow untruthful. Romanticized portrayals of mental illness don't sit right with me, and don't seem to be a step in the right direction. It doesn't feel right to gloss over (or glorify too much) the ugly that comes with the pretty.
The poem below is a "love" from my love-hate relationship with Romantic poetry and Romantic poets. . . right on, Baudelaire. I won't say too much about it, other than that I feel like it hits at what I feel like without making it too pretty. The last line doesn't translate that well and is better in French; I'm including the original French version of the poem, too. I'm new to this site, so maybe someone has put it out there already. In any case, I hope it resonates with someone as much as it does with me.
The Albatross
by Charles Baudelaire (translated by Eli Siegel)
Often, to amuse themselves the men of the crew
Lay hold of the albatross, vast birds of the seas-
Who follow, sluggish companions of the voyage,
The ship gliding on the bitter gulfs.
Hardly have they placed them on the planks,
Than these kings of the azure, clumsy and shameful,
Let, piteously, their great wings in white,
Like oars, drag at their sides.
This winged traveler, how he is awkward and weak!
He, lately so handsome, how comic he is and uncomely!
Someone bothers his beak with a short pipe,
Another imitates, limping, the ill thing that flew!
The poet resembles the prince of the clouds
Who is friendly to the tempest and laughs at the bowman;
Banished to ground in the midst of hootings,
His wings, those of a giant, hinder him from walking.
[and in the original french]
L'albatross
Souvent, pour s'amuser, les hommes d'équipage
Prennent des albatros, vastes oiseaux des mers,
Qui suivent, indolents compagnons de voyage,
Le navire glissant sur les gouffres amers.
À peine les ont-ils déposés sur les planches,
Que ces rois de l'azur, maladroits et honteux,
Laissent piteusement leurs grandes ailes blanches
Comme des avirons traîner à côté d'eux.
Ce voyageur ailé, comme il est gauche et veule!
Lui, naguère si beau, qu'il est comique et laid!
L'un agace son bec avec un brûle-gueule,
L'autre mime, en boitant, l'infirme qui volait!
Le Poète est semblable au prince des nuées
Qui hante la tempête et se rit de l'archer;
Exilé sur le sol au milieu des huées,
Ses ailes de géant l'empêchent de marcher.
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I do have a love-hate
I do have a love-hate relationship with Romantic poets. Sometimes I want to shake them and say, "Stop it! Stop trying to make it seem so beautiful! 70-568 Stop being so proud of yourselves and your own melancholy!" Maybe it's a gender thing-- male romantic poets seem to duke it out or out-macho each other by seeing who can be darker, more mysterious, madder. 70-567 It is beautiful sometimes (it being bipolar disorder/mental illness), but romanticizing (pun intended) it that way is dangerous and somehow untruthful. Romanticized portrayals of mental illness don't sit right 70-565 with me, and don't seem to be a step in the right direction. It doesn't feel right to gloss over (or glorify too much) the ugly that comes with the pretty.70-564
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Albatross vs Icarus
You definitely bring up some interesting points. Infatuation with romantic poetry (especially French romantics like Baudelaire, Rimbaud and Verlaine) was a definitely a 'phase' for me. I was completely infatuated with Rimbaud’s “A Season in Hell” when I was twenty. I think I used the romantic’s glorification of madness and suffering to rationalize my own state of mind. This could have even prevented me from being more proactive in seeking help and support, who knows. Baudelaire's Albatross poem is particularly striking when contrasted with the Icarus myth (I assume that was your intension). That contrast certainly brings across your point as far as romanticizing misery and failure is concerned; Baudelair’s poem is much more depressing and self critical than the Icarus myth. In the Icarus myth Icarus has agency; it was he who flew to close to the sun, maybe next time he will be more careful. In Baudelaire’s poem the albatross has no agency in his plight; he is beaten (“bothers his beak with a short pipe”) and harassed (“Banished to ground in the midst of hootings”) by others. I think it is the relinquishment of agency through the glorification of suffering that damns the romantics as a model for madness.
~ Curt
His wings, those of a
His wings, those of a giant, hinder him from walking.
this is really great, i totally know what you mean julia.
i often have a similar relationship with the romantic poets. it's so beautiful, but wait they are romantacizing mental illness and that's not cool, it's not accurate...life can be beautiful without madness, but madness is so beautiful sometimes.
i feel the same way about Rimbaud. and maybe they really were trying to compete with their madness, your probably right. A modern poet that feels that way for me is Sylvia Plath, boy do I have a love hate relatioship with her. She gave me something to initially relate my pain too when it began, but now i get so annoyed at her for being so absorbed in her own psyche, for being the archetype, the role model for female poets. as the bikini kill song goes " the sylvia plath story is told to girls who write. who was it that told me, that to be a girl poet, means you have to die?"
but yes, i share your love hate relationship with the romantic poets, and the albatross is a beautiful poem.
" I am a work in progress
Dressed in the fabric of a world unfolding
Offering me intricate patterns of questions
Rhythms that never come clean
And strengths that you still haven't seen" - Ani Difranco
Those of a giant
Thanks for your post-- I can't express how nice it is to know that someone else thinks about this kind of stuff. You're so right about Sylvia Plath! I think the word "absorbed" is just right... Her poetry is so intense and beautiful, but do we need to die for the beauty? I'd rather not, and I hope it's not necessary. I hadn't heard that Bikini Kill song, and they really have it right. There are so many female writers who ended this way. When people talk about how they wish they'd lived during some period in history or another, I always think to myself about how hard it would've been to be in those shoes, those of any woman (especially with depression or bipolar or whatever) a long time ago, and possibly especially if creative or otherwise aspiring, like Virginia Woolf, Sylvia Plath, Anne Sexton. I feel like creative (and partly mad?) women have at least a little more understanding and support than before.
I like the Ani Difranco quote, too. She's one of my favorite current poets/lyricists :).